A musical by Robin & Delwyn McKenzie
"Choices" tells the story of a group of early teens who are influenced
by a few of their number to make some dumb decisions. One of them learns
to stand up for what is right through the wise words of a friend's grandmother
using 3 enacted biblical examples.
Note: This document contains only the first 2 scenes of the script.
The full script (+ music) may be purchased by contacting the authors, whose
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Main characters: 4 M, 5 F; Biblical characters: 13-20 (M/F)
(Note: We did it with 30 kids and each of them had a part even if it
was just one line.)
Peer pressure/standing up for what is right/no compromise (could also be
used to precede an evangelistic message)
Rom 12:2, Joshua 24:15, Deut 30:19
Scene 1: Above the cliff
[The stage is bare apart from a few rocks for sitting and playing on.]
Angie: Back to school tomorrow.
Shakes: Last day of freedom for the downtrodden masses.
Wes: So what are we going to do today?
Mandy: We could hang out at the mall.
Smarts: Yet again?
Wes: How about shooting some hoops?
Kevin: Yeah, Iím for that. Who else is coming?
Mandy: Iíve still got blisters from the last game.
Jason: No, Iím taking it easy today.
Smarts: Only if everyoneís playing. Two on two is too much like hard
Wes: Okay, so letís all play.
Mandy: Weíd rather go to the mall, wouldnít we, Angie?
Angie: Definitely. Looks like itís 1 on 1, guys.
Mandy: But Zoe and Shakespeare will cheer you on from the sideline.
Zoe/Shakes: Yeah, right!
Jason: What say we go to the beach?
Mandy: Now thereís an idea.
Kevin: Yeah, let's hit some waves. You can borrow my board, Wes.
Wes: Okay, I guess I can shoot some buckets at lunch tomorrow.
Shakes: One last day of sunbathing before weíre confined to the cold
half-light of the classroom dungeons.
Angie: I love lying in the sun. How about you, Zoe?
Zoe: Sure, itíll be fun.
Jason: You too, Smarts, you can bake that egghead of yours in the hot
Kevin: Then you won't have any more half-baked ideas.
Smarts: [smiling] Watch it, you guys. I might cook up a plan for you
while I'm there.
Zoe: Which way are we going? Through the park or past the station?
Angie: The park is nicer.
Smarts: But further.
Mandy: There canít be much in it. And weíd rather go through the park
even if it was twice as far, hey Shakespeare?
Shakes: Verily, for the odor of diesel engines does not compare with
the fragrance of the fair blossoms of summer.
Wes: Give it a break, Shakes.
Kevin: Girls! Let them take the long way round. We can spend an extra
half hour at the beach without them.
Smarts: Twenty five minutes by my reckoning, plus or minus two minutes.
Jason: Hey, listen up, guys. If you want the quickest way, I know a
shortcut. And if itís scenery you like, my way beats the park, hands down.
Mandy: So what are we waiting for? Lead on.
Zoe: Just a minute. Where is this shortcut? If itís through the golf
course, you know weíre meant to stay out of there.
Jason: Itís not through the golf course. Itís much closer than that.
Shakes: Where then? Tell us, o fearless leader.
Jason: Straight ahead.
Angie: Over the cliff?
Wes: Dude! That would certainly be quicker.
Smarts: Iíd say it would be twelve minutes quicker than going past
the station and thirty seven minutes quicker than through the park.
Zoe: Unless we fell.
Shakes: In which case it would be, ermÖ
Jason: Hey, I didnít figure you guys for a bunch of chickens. Anyway,
itís not a cliff, itís a Ö steep decline.
Smarts: Thatís correct. It canít be more than 79 degrees above the
Zoe: Well, pardon me, but I didnít bring my rappelling gear!
Mandy: Come on, Zoe, it canít be that bad.
Shakes: I suppose youíve actually been down there yourself, Jason?
Jason: Dozens of times. Me and my brother always go that way.
Kevin: Yeah, and Iíve been down and back a couple of times.
Mandy: Shakespeare, youíre not going to let the side down, are you?
We canít let Mr. Macho and his crew think we havenít got what it takes.
Shakes: Not at all. I welcome the opportunity for adventure: Boldly
going where no woman has gone before!
Wes: You think itís okay, Smarts? Would you go down there?
Smarts:Well letís take a look first, assess the parameters. [Looks
Wes: Dude! Thatís quite a drop.
Smarts: Technically no, but I get your point. Now if we move along
a little [Smarts and Wes go to corner of stage], you see itís not quite
so steep. I reckon we could get down easy enough from here.
Jason: Exactly. [goes to corner of stage] This is where I normally
go down. Come on, guys, itís a piece of cake.
Wes: Okay. If Smarts thinks itís do-able, I guess thatís good enough
Zoe: Well itís not good enough for me. I think you need your
head read! If you fell youíd break your neck.
Smarts: Not if you were three feet from the bottom at the time.
Angie: Yeah, but it's a long way down to reach three feet from the
Jason: You don't need to be so scared. It'll be easy. All you need
to do is follow the leader and put your feet and hands where the one in
front puts theirs.
Mandy: Just like that song. How does it go? [begins singing]
Song: Follow the leader
Kevin: What kind of song is that?
Smarts: It's a style called bossanova.
Mandy: Yeah, bossanova. I like it.
Zoe: I do too. What I don't like is Jason bossin' us over the cliff.
Jason: I'm not bossing anyone. But if you want to get down there quickly
and safely, just follow me. So what do you say, Angie?
Angie: Well... maybe.
Mandy: And if you're scared, don't look down.
Zoe: It's not a matter of being scared. It's a matter of common sense.
Why put your life at risk when there's a perfectly sensible way of getting
Smarts: How do you know you wouldn't get knocked over by a car if you
went past the station?
Mandy: Or mugged if you went through the park?
Zoe: In broad daylight?
Smarts: It's possible.
Zoe: All I'm saying is the risks are much higher if we go down there
and frankly I don't think they're worth it.
Mandy: Well most of us think it's the best way to go. Even Angie thinks
it'll probably be okay, hey, Angie?
Angie: Well... maybe. Yeah, probably. I'd say it'd be okay. Yeah, why
Jason: Hey, there's a brave lady. Come on, Zoe. You don't want to have
to go the long way round all by yourself.
Zoe: No, I'd rather we all went the sensible way.
Mandy: And you're part of the group. And groups stick together.
Kevin: You can follow me or Jason. We'll make sure you don't fall.
Wes: If I can do it, you can do it.
Shakes:All for one and one for all!
Jason: What do you say?
Zoe: Okay. I'll come with you. But I still think I'm right and this
is a dumb idea.
Shakes:Lead on, McDuff!
[Blackout as Jason leads the way off edge of stage]
Scene 2a: In Grandma's kitchen
[Angie and Zoe are seated at table. Grandma is going to and from shelves
or counter, getting tea things]
Angie: At least it was only sprained.
Gran: And this was Kevin, you say?
Zoe: No, Grandma, it was Wesley. He was a bit hesitant about going
down there in the first place.
Gran: So why did he go then?
Angie: I think he would have rather gone past the station, but he didn't
want the other guys to think he was scared.
Zoe: He wasn't the only one scared.
Angie: No, I suppose I was too.
Zoe: I didn't mean just you. Probably we all were.
Gran: You probably all were.
Angie: Surely Jason and Kevin weren't. They'd been down there before.
Gran: That doesn't necessarily mean they weren't afraid. And they probably
will be next time if theyíre fool enough to try it again.
Zoe: I knew it was a dumb idea. I don't know why I went along
Angie: At least you let everyone know it was a dumb idea. I thought
it was too, but I let them persuade me anyway.
Zoe: Why couldn't I convince them that it was too dangerous to try?
What would you have said, Grandma, if you were in my place?
Gran: [sits and serves tea] I'm not sure I would have said anything
different from what you said, dear. Sometimes people just won't listen
to sense, especially when they're in a group. Probably none of you would
have gone that way if you were alone. But no one wants to be the odd man
out. Sometimes it only takes a suggestion to put pressure on everyone to
Angie: Like follow the leader.
Zoe: Which is all well and good if the leader is going the right way.
Gran: But if he's going the wrong way -- well, who'd want to be a lemming?
Zoe: We really weren't much diffferent, were we, going over the cliff,
like a bunch of lemmings?
Gran: It has happened before, you know. Remember the story of the twelve
Angie: Twelve spies?
Gran: In the Bible. You know the story, don't you girls?
Zoe: Yes, but I'd like to hear your version.
Angie: Me too.
Gran: Well I'll tell you...
Scene 2b: Outside Canaan
Moses: Atten-tion! [ the 12 spring to attention for the role call. Each
responds "Sir!" as his name is called.] Shammua, Shaphat, Caleb,
Igal, Joshua, Palti, Gaddiel, Gaddi, Ammiel, Sethur, Nahbi, Geuel. You
twelve have been chosen for an important reconaissance mission. Now listen
up, cause I'm not going to repeat these instructions: Go northward through
the Negev into the hill country. See what the land is like and find out
whether the people living there are strong or weak, few or many. What kind
of land do they live in? Is it good or bad? Do their towns have walls or
are they unprotected? How is the soil? Is it fertile or poor? Are there
many trees? Enter the land boldly and bring back samples of the crops you
see. Any questions? Good. Dis-miss! [the 12 dismiss and march off through
audience singing an army-style echoed refrain]
Shammua: We'll take Canaan there's no doubt.
Group: We'll take Canaan there's no doubt.
Shammua: First we gotta check it out.
Group: First we gotta check it out.
Shammua: We're the men to get it done.
Group: We're the men to get it done.
Shammua: Moses chose us everyone.
Group: Moses chose us everyone.
Palti: I'm tired of marching.
Igal: Me too.
Gaddiel: Then do something to take your mind off it.
Shaphat: We could play a game.
Ammiel: Like what?
Geuel: I spy with my little eye something beginning with... [intro
to song: let us go right on inÖ]
Song: Let us go right on in
[after a quick circuit the spies return, Caleb and Joshua carrying
a big bunch of grapes between them]
Caleb: We're back!
Joshua: Moses, Sir, take a look at these!
Moses: Welcome back! At ease, men. We're all itching to hear your report...
Well, come on, tell all!
Song: Promised Land Blues
Scene 2c: In Grandma's kitchen
Gran: So you see, because the ten spies suggested it might be difficult,
the whole nation followed the leader in the wrong direction.
Zoe: But Grandma, that was totally different from our situation, maybe
even the opposite. What I was trying to tell everyone was like that the
cliff was too dangerous to go down, so I was more like the ten spies who
warned everyone to stay out of Canaan because of the danger.
Angie: Yeah, it was only Caleb and Joshua who were brave enough to
Zoe: So you could say the Israelites did listen to sense.
Gran: Well, I beg to differ on that score. I don't think they made
the wise choice.
Zoe: Go on.
Gran: Tell me, dear, which of the spies got to Canaan in the end?
Zoe: Was it just Caleb and Joshua?
Gran: Yes. And what happened to the rest of them?
Angie: I think they all died in the desert, but I don't remember how.
Gran: Some died from overeating, some died of snake bites, some got
swallowed alive when the earth opened up.
Gran: Now do you still think it was more dangerous to go straight into
Angie: No way.
Gran: And that was the way Caleb and Joshua wanted to go, the safe
way, the smart way. Kind of like you wanted to go round the long way to
the beach. And most people wouldn't listen to sense. [gets up to get something]
You see, the real question is which is the wise choice?
Zoe: I see. It was wiser for the Israelites to go like straight in
rather than going through the desert.
Angie: Even if there were giants.
Gran: Exactly. Now tell me why that was the wise choice?
Zoe: Was it because that was what God wanted them to do?
Gran: [leans over table] That's right. Even more than that, it was
what he had already told them to do. And you can't make a better choice
than doing what God tells you to do.
Angie: I guess not.
[Grandma gestures: ďMore tea?Ē]
Zoe: Thanks, Grandma... We're gonna have to go. I've got stacks of
homework. [gets up]
Angie: Me too. Thanks for the story. [gets up]
Zoe: Yeah, thanks Grandma.
Gran: Anytime. Now you'd better get along, but have another cookie
for the road. [offers plate]
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